My drawing of my made up final fantasy summon

[Kirin]

http://fastfable.deviantart.com/art/kirin-191758290

cliCKY on te link pls comment and be as critical as possible

[ArgyleNinja]

I'll comment here, since my dA profile's being uber-bitchy.

Not bad, but would it have killed you to put in a little color?

[Kirin]

im a black and white manga artist colour kinds of ruin it unless im doing it on computer

[Melkor]

You seem to have some talent as an artist.

Funny, because you can't construct sentences to save your life.

:)

[Kirin]

T_T thanks i think...

[holy0crux]

Very nice!

I was looking at your handwriting then I looked at your picture...I'm thinking...You're the kind of person who cares about the big picture rather than the tiny details, yes?

AMIRIGHT?! =D

[Kirin]

yeah as you can see from melkor's constant comments on my sentence stucture i dont give a crap about tiny details when it comes to writing and other stuff i onlt care bout the final outcome the BIG PICTURE

[Luka]

You need to focus on proportions of the human body. Start practicing the human before anime or whatever....then, you can branch out to other styles of art. So, the basics is good for drawing. Trust me.

[Cookies]

It's good, but there's not much too it yet. Plus I totally can't see the theme of it from that picture.

plus you should totally post your DA in the art collections thread :P

[Kirin]

@luka my porportians are usually perfect this one i dont know happened with this one it went slightly off track

[Luka]

^ Just practice. I suggest the basics of the human body instead of jumping into anime o: LIKE i said before.
You can't rush art.