Nevfx
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Now I feel stupid... I'm still waiting for fan feedback before I keep the story going. So, your next series will be on Lightining? Can I ask for some spoilers?

Sorry, for the ungodly long message Took me a while to type

After you win, Sephiroth claims she didn't do bad for a puppet and says that his job is done. He retreats and Terra, still worried, senses the Onion Knight is still alive and well. She proceeds to rush back in hopes of saving him. Then a cute little icon of a Red Mage comes up and asks for feedback and stuff like that. That is the First Quest. Long, I know. What do you think for the basis? I'll provide the background to the story, if ya want. I might as well tell you. If we'll be remaking each others quests then what the heck, am i right?

The Emperor tells Kefka to fetch the CoD, saying that she is vital to Kefka's plan, and Kefka proceeds to get her. The screen fades to black and he says evil stuff and yeah. Just typical stuff. Soon, dearie, soon, I think. The next scene shows Terra. She is clearing the area of enemies and when she is done, she senses that the Onion Knight, back at Lunar Subterranean is in trouble. I was a little unspecific at this part, due to lack of text boxes but yeah. She proceeds to leave but is caught of guard by Sephiroth. Terra says that she doesn't want to fight him but, she gets cut off by him, saying that she is a puppet that doesn't have the will to say no, and he says that she wants to see what she can do. This begins the next fight, Terre versus Sephiroth. You have to win in three minutes. Ya know, to rush back to the Onion Knight and save him and whatnot, which again wasn't obvious due to text boxes. Again, the equipment is a problem but will be improved later. This IS a rough draft.

After the fight, Cecil claims to have underestimated their strength and retreats. The Onion Knight is mildly wounded from the last battle and is hurt but he still rants about how Cecil attacked them. Terra points out that he wasn't acting like his normal self and the Onion Knight agrees. They decide to move onward and search for answers. Terra says that she'll handle the fighting until he recovers. He, of course, reacts with a child like attitude, but nevertheless succumbs to Terra's demands. The next Scene takes place in the Empyreal Paradox and focuses on Kefka showing the Emperor how he managed to control Cecil and asking for his help to develop his plan. The Emperor questions why he would help them, and Kefka answers with world-under-your-boot stuff. The Emperor agrees to help but Kefka has one condition to all this. He states that he wants Terra and The Emperor tells him he can as he pleases with her.

Cecil greets them strangely, accusing them of hiding in the Lunar Subterranean. The Onion Knight begins to respond but is interrupted. Cecil tells him to be silent and that he has orders from the King of Baron to arrest the two for treason. Terra, ponders about the odd feeling she is getting and about Cecil's behavior. Cecil advances to attack the Onion Knight, thus the first fight. You play as the Onion Knight with a Terra assist. He is level 25, Cecil is 30. My equipment, at the moment, isn't to good. I only just got the game last week. So, the fight is a little difficult due to lack of good stuff.

Your Quest sounds really, really good. The amount of detail you put in to it and the idea for it is great. I wish I had came up with something like that. My story is still in the rough stages. I'll go ahead and tell you what happens in the rough draft version of the first quest. It starts with Terra and the Onion Knight in the Lunar Subterranean. Terra begins to have an odd feeling that scares her. The Onion Knight notices and asks her if she is okay. She responds, saying she zoned out and the Onion Knight suggests that they keep moving, if that is the case. She begins to ponder whether she is being paranoid and just imagining things. She decides to ask the Onion Knight for advice on the situation. As she asks the Onion Knight, he see's in the distance Cecil and runs to greet him. Terra quickly follows behind him.

Will do. But if I'm to remake it I'm gonna need every detail. I'm getting ahead of myself though I'll check it out and tell you what I think on at least two of your ideas. in the mean time, I need to find some way to advertise my quests. But I SUCK at signatures.

Ahh, I like that. I might do something like that too. So, can you tell me some things about one of your quests?